Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sprting events can lead to anitisocial, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports are encouraging young sports players to join in a national team. Some people asserts that these sports encourage violence and harmful activities whereas some people says that team sports improve the power of the nation. In my opinion, team sports are good and we should follow the rules to maintain a healthy team sports.
Firstly, soccer is the most emotional game as compared to other games around the world. People are eager to see the soccer game because the game is interesting to see and the expectation are high as compared to other team sports such as cricket and football. For instance, There are seventy percentage of people are seeing soccer game in the television and some of them are watching the game in the stadium. This shows how people encourage their team players and the player should consider the rule while playing games to avoid egregious behaviour and violences.
Secondly, team sports should be encouraged by individuals and the respective game council. For example, an individual has some talents to get a high changes of goals in soccer but at the same time the leader is needed to lead the team to avoid bad behavior and stop fights between the teams.
In conclusion, although the team sports are having some non-social behaviors, the team leader and the council should teach their teams not to do violences and it will be helpful for the future generation to start their career as a sports player.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that these sports encourage violence and harmful activities whereas some people s...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sport'?
Suggestion: sport
...ow the rules to maintain a healthy team sports. Firstly, soccer is the most emo...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e generation to start their career as a sports player.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89837398374 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43297692011 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8595217872 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193948980797 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933947852044 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047565401424 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130734034563 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351533284799 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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