In some countries people of all ages place extra emphasis on sports and exercising Do you think it is a positive development Give your opinion and relevant examples from your own experience
This is a topic which elicits keen interest among the people around the globe. The unprecedented popularity of putting more effort into physical activities and healthy habits is a constructive development. Let us examine this further to understand the significance of this.
Despite age limits, people should concern about their health. It has been proven by many research that a sedentary lifestyle causes an increasing number of illnesses. Currently, a growing number of people involved in sports and daily activities compared to the past. One of the prime reasons for this trend could be social networking platforms, in which many people are sharing their active life encouraging their loved ones to follow the same. For instance, it is not uncommon to find at least one friend in our networks who post their workout photos every couple of days.
Furthermore, in many countries, people are organizing public running events, sporting tournaments and promoting well-being as marketing campaigns for certain commodities. Such events motivate children as well as adults to engage in more activities. Earlier, there were few major events such as the Olympics, world-cup championships, to signify the importance of sports. This has changed drastically during the last couple of decades and now almost every city is organizing various kind of such events to revitalize its citizens.
It is exciting to see changes in people's lives positively, and this is the way to go forward to have a better future.
To recapitulate, the accumulating number of health issues can be mitigated with this trend of emphasizing on sports and exercises. Social networking sites and local promotional campaigns are excellent examples of this development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
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Suggestion:
...excellent examples of this development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, at least, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40441176471 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94653005412 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5590637733 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599789426165 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218528797225 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244064979578 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320304864363 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012225722064 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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