You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. On getting home, you realised you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager stating:
Details of your stay
The items you left behind
What you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I would like to have your assistance to look for a missing document at your hotel at 3.00 pm this afternoon. I had a business meeting with one of our major client and the meeting was held at the Orchid room of your hotel from 1.00 pm to 3.00 pm. I realised that one of my critical business agreement document is missing after reached home. I believe that I left it on the sofa seat at the corner of the room.
The document was enclosed in a sealed white colour envelope with my company logo. It contains some sensitive business information. Any leak of such information will be detrimental to our company.
Therefore, I urged your immediate assistance to locate it and handover to an express courier service as I am unable to come and collect it personally. I will arrange the courier service and will let you know the details.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any concerns and thanks in advance for your prompt support.
Yours sincerely,
Jack London.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of your hotel from 1.00 pm to 3.00 pm. I realised that one of my critical busine...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...document is missing after reached home. I believe that I left it on the sofa seat...
^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...port. Yours sincerely, Jack London.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63276836158 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5690875165 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6905895415 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186528699537 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611005616851 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429954332028 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936564617648 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447172475071 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.