People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
These days, the consumption of sugary drinks increases significantly. However, using exceedingly sugary drinks is the principal reason behind people’s health problems. This essay will present some causes of this trend and propose some solutions to reduce sugar-sweetened beverage intake.
To start with, sugary drinks such as soft or energy drinks are favored because they can provide energy immediately to help consumers increased mental alertness and maintain high concentration which necessary for working or studying. In the dynamic lifestyle, less rest time while more workloads, people need to replenish energy quickly and sugar-based drinks are the best choices for this situation. Moreover, the producers always improving the taste of their beverage and concentrate on advertising to attract more consumers so sugary drinks are more and more popular in the community.
However, there are some solutions to decrease the consumption of sugary beverages. Firstly, people should gain awareness about beverages with added sugar or other sweeteners, they contain some unhealthy implements which can cause diabetes or fattigue, and gain knowledge of a healthy diety and lifestyle. For instant, they can enhance doing exercise every morning to charge more powerful for long day work or using fruit juices instead of energy drinks. Besides, governments also should impose higher taxes on the production and distribution of sugar-based drinks as well as restricting the promotion of these products on television.
In conclusion, there are many factors made sugary beverages become more and more favored but it is not too difficult to discourage people from using them. In my opinion, I believe that this trend will be solved quickly if each citizens rise awareness of protecting themselves from the health problems which cause of sugar-based drinks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60854092527 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82269450354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7239602427 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319932696595 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117538008955 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714980324077 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20022075106 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544037786468 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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