Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is mostly said that money is the key to happiness. Some thinkers have a viewpoint that richness does not actually a assurance of happiness as it cannot buy everything such as peace or clam for the heart however, I have a viewpoint if you have enough money then you can live happy and comfortable life.
To begin with, as per the supporter of the fact that enough money is not the sign of happiness is that first of all the people who have more money they have more egoistic. They presume that the people around them are just for the sake of their money and hence, they start building hi-tech walls around them and isolated themselves from their loved ones. They don’t value emotions of the person but value the money only which makes them more cruel and mean.
On the flip side, if the person possesses more money he can give a better life to his family and relatives. In today’s world the status is not recognized the cast of the person in spite of the financial stability is act as real measure for this. Financially stable means that providing luxurious life to family and able to buy all kind of happiness for the family. If family is a happy nothing left to think. Moreover, you have great deal of money you can easily help a needy and can do some good wills to make others life better for instance, can assist a poor child in his education.
To conclude, wealthy might not assure the peace in life but it help to make family happy and also help to make world better to life for other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y all kind of happiness for the family. If family is a happy nothing left to think...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42805755396 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19330384362 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507194244604 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8929689624 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.909090909 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102930503676 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390054264791 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372740669556 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063580577595 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355977057512 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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