Snowden Movie Review
Nowadays, a wide range of documentary and biography films are produced, and Snowden is one of the best ones. It was produced in 2016 and revealed a true story. In this essay, a brief of the story and the writer’s own opinion about the Snowden’s tendency will be mentioned.
The story shows a talented young man in military service who wanted to give good services to his country. After an accident, he had to resign the military service and immediately he joined to CIA. He was a top student and resolved hard questions in a short time. After years working for the government, he realized their lies; moreover, he found out some criminal actions about private privacies, so he decided to reveal all lies via a state news agency. Finally, he did it and all the government’s agents were looking for him across the globe. They couldn’t find it, and he could stay in Russia in protection of them.
What is Snowden’s tendency? He had a good job with great salary in his motherland. He was a well-qualified man, so he was the only man who could make a contract as a private company with CIA. If he had not broadcast the classified information, he would have lived in his home. This fact is testified that his carrier, money, and situation could not satisfy him. He was looking for another great one. He knew if he said the truth, he would have consequences, but he did it. He was going to say Americans that almost all authorities are not angel. People must pay attention and listen to the news with a bit of suspicion.
Overall, this is a good film with a lot of special effects, the actors are cute, and the script is created according to a true story. The genre of the film is a mix from documentary and biography. The main actress is a bit silly. I like it and suggest it to my friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...would have consequences, but he did it. He was going to say Americans that almost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48780487805 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66844762559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6986837425 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354929936485 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0177760691653 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048504473416 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344110871011 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482816249685 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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