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one of the most hardest parts our lives is raising children and the environment where they should live. According to me, it is better for children to grow up in the large city than in a country side. I have three reasons for this: they cannot experience advanced social circumstances, there is not much to play, and education is better in large cities.
First of all, children cannot experience advanced social circumstances. For instance, children who live in metropolitan area undergo a lot of events since they were young, so they can admit well than countryside children. one good example is my uncle who used to live in countryside but decided to move in city. He could not do things in countryside because it lacks some electricity and transportation.
Next, there is not much to play. In a large city, there are many place to play. For example in my country, there are kids cafes, amusement park, waterpark and so on. but on the other hand, the countryside has few of these. so children cannot play enough and enjoy their youth.
Lastly, education is better in a large city. there are many schools, libraries and educational institutions. Hence, they can study in a better environment. one good example in my place, there are many public libraries. Inside, it has a good facility: a place to rest or eat, clean toilet, studying room for students, and many kinds of books. so we can study as much as we want.
As a result, a large city is a good place for children to grow. because they can learn more better, experience in various way, and enjoy their youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, lastly, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68111045784 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6946212325 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0272060934449 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108264258992 0.076458572812 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228321693561 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0156188542422 0.150856017488 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192142693422 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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