In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
With development of big shopping centres or malls recently, a lot of localized small shops have been closed as people prefer to do shopping from these malls. In my opinion, I consider that a large population is being benefitted by this trend but there are certain people of society in developing and under-developed countries who are so affected that they struggle to survive.
With globalization, things of different cultures and even different countries are available locally in shopping malls which definitely seem to be a positive development. All material of different sizes and range is available in these malls and one does not needs to go to different shops to search for things of their choice. Further, in shopping malls, goods are available at competitive prices which ultimately benefits consumers. Moreover, shopping malls are considered to be a place where people can do shopping enjoying with family leisurely.
On the other side, Local shops understand the needs of local community which shopping malls cannot fulfil. Increasing shopping malls are affecting local shops and those who operate at small level have started to close their business as they find it hard to survive the competitive market. This trend is creating lot of problems such as unemployment and for an under-developed or developing countries this trend is difficult to tackle as there are many other problems for example poverty, proper education system and problem of unemployment worsen the situation.
In conclusion, although, I believe that shopping centres and malls represents that society is progressing, while there are adverse effects on localized communities of underdeveloped and developing countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ailable in these malls and one does not needs to go to different shops to search for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44905660377 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00904060835 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8905688709 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461800968701 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197487360894 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112615878248 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287213920063 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679108903585 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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