Psychological illness may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses. Nevertheless, they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities, the latter being regarded as a ‘taboo’ subject sometimes. To what extent do your agree with this view?
most of the times, physical illnesses are prominently visible to everyone than psychological illnesses. Although both are as equal as disability in its own ways, however, people with psychological illness is prohibited by same society which easily accepts physical illnesses. In my opinion, I believe that disabilities physical in nature are accepted more easily as compared to psychological one, however, modern society has started to accept such disabilities.
society can easily see the sufferings and situation of physical ill persons. however, no one can judge someone sitting next is suffering from serious mental illness. equality is preamble of a developed society, however, after knowing that person is psychological ill, our society starts discriminating these people. it considered that such persons can harm anyone because no one can know what is going on in their mind. most of the employers discourage such people on their job which leads to job insecurity also.
due to discrimination being faced by people suffering from psychological illness, these people don’t discuss the issues being faced them. such approach multiplies the problems as treatment of these problems can be found only after discussion.
Finally, it has been accepted by the modern society that due to working conditions, a lot of people suffers mental pressure. anyone can face such issues and special care and support is needed to deal with the issue. because it affects people from all walks, people are becoming more tolerant and aware and future will bring helpful environment for such persons.
In conclusion, I believe that now, in most of the societies, psychological ill persons are not accepted so easily than physical ill, however, we are progressing towards developed society which treats both people the same way.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4823943662 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86318274192 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5523397509 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303373106412 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113119818494 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108547333405 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18018595496 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138134671712 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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