In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days in some parts of the world humans encounter with an economic drop by this cause it will be better if these developing countries appeal only to their own troubles without any helps to other countries.Well in general,i completely disagree with this opinion. In Uzbekistan,for example,they help to their neighbor countries not only financially but also spiritually even they need money or other economical needs.In this essay we I will explain reason of my answer and I will give some examples from my own life and experience.
First of all,some people believe the best way to leave the economical problem is saving money rather than lending them to other lands.In my opinion it's personally false this could be because there is one wise proverb that's " The best donation is the donation when you need money".What it mean by this that humans must help each other even they need economical or spiritual support and I my thoughts go to that people should support each other in all worse conditions if they manage it will be exemplary and meritorious.
All things considered,although it is a common belief that these economical troubles separate or unite international people.After all, do not say in vain that a friend is known to be in trouble.
Nurullaev Mansur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, after all, for example, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01877934272 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99763695718 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.440744679 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.25 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.25 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231819745204 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100318167941 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695027047133 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128846994628 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713422898828 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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