Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But there is a fact that their work is not appreciated as men’s although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family, and career. So, someone said: “A woman’s place is in the home. What do you think?
Nowadays, we are living in the developed world which is contributed by both men and women. But still women have to encounter many difficulties due to gender descrimination which they dont deserve. Many people says, a woman's place is in the home but i donot agree with this thought. i will discuss the cause of such mentality and how we can give positive messsage for women empowerment.
Generally speaking, the kind of inequality has existed from past hundreds of years almost in every area of the world.Gender inequality is quite often and old thing specially in asian counteries, as in ancient times people thought that having only male child can help them in their last years and also it will increase the income of the family because at that time only males used to work. so this was the main reason of such descrimination.
There are many counteries where female doing more works. This is becasue of proper eductaion on female inequality. it can be done by improving a gender-sensitive curriculum which reflects national policy on gender equality nad this will create a good thought in young generation.women socities and groups should be made to avoid any female harrasment cases , this will create a fear in mind of people before doing any wrong deed.
To conclude, i would say that women still faces the descrimination in thi mordern world and the only way to get it fade away is b giving peoper knowledge to upcoming generation and making strict laws againt this ineqaulity. i hope for the best for our future as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84790874525 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78239486579 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.339435464 50.4703680194 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194809521392 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626895679375 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411757602035 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975489812487 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047367531506 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.