The first chart below shows the results of a survey with sample the cross section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travel for the period 1994 to 1998. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period
Write a report for a University lecturer describing and formation shown below.
Given in the table is information collected by a survey carried out on UK residents' purposes of travelling abroad and given in the bar chart are places where they mainly went to.
As shown in the illustration, from 1994 to 1998 British went overseas chiefly for holiday and their main choice of final destination was Western Europe. The total trend was upwards.
Having a closer look at the table, it can be reckoned that holiday abroad retained a fully dominant features and was in its trend in increase( being about 15246 people in 1994 and reaching 20700 people in 1998). Moreover, some British chose to travel abroad for business, with figures about five times and six times lower than those of holiday reason in 1994 and 1998 respectively. Followed by that was visits to friends and relatives. Other reasons recorded the lowest number compared with others, and the figures were rather unstable during the period.
Among the areas picked as destinations, Western Europe was chosen by a majority of tourists while North America was of the least options. The gap between those two places was huge, as the number of English visitors to Western Europe was nine times higher than that of North America. Furthermore, from 1994 to 1995, the number of British to Western Europe dwindled but upsurged again toward 1998. During the same time, North America remained stabilized. English visitors also opted for other areas, but the number of them was far lower than that went to Western Europe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9561752988 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3624658182 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.151155841 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14849178497 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497705556978 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488414457077 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986490718288 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480582026981 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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