Being a celebrity - such as a movie star or professional athlete - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?
Nowadays with the advancement of mass media, talented people in many fields are widely known among people in all walks of life. They are celebrities and it is believed that being public figures has pros and cons, but I think that the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages.
With regards to the drawbacks, famous people have to sacrifice their private life for reputation. Being distinguished means being the centre of attention and disturbed all the time. Celebrities have to act and behave properly whenever they are on cameras to protect images as a minor mistake can destroy their career completely. Therefore, renown people can not live true to themselves. Moreover, they have to accept the fact of always being tracked by reporters whenever they are at home or outside, which is annoying.
However, celebrities who can overcome those disadvantages achieve a lot. Wherever they go they always receive admiration from their fans and are treated nobly. For example, every time a famous person appears in public there are always red carpet, reporters, cameras, luxurious cars, and lots of fans crazy about their idol. Another positive side to state is the financial benefit. Celebrities earn a lot through their work or performances. For instance, Rafael Nadal, a talented and professional tennis player, gain lots of money after a tournament. Now his possession is huge and he has a training centre for himself.
To conclude, being famous has many drawbacks, but the benefits are much more to consider. Celebrities can not live a normal life, but they have the reputation, the possession and the success which are not easy to achieve.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-04-20 | kimnhung | 67 | view |
| 2022-01-12 | lethaianh | 80 | view |
| 2022-01-10 | manhta | 60 | view |
| 2022-01-01 | nguyendangquang.aspect | 84 | view |
| 2020-04-20 | HoangAnh452001 | 81 | view |
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show the changes in a town after a construction of a hydroelectric power dam 74
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 89
- Being a celebrity such as a movie star or professional athlete brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks 81
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15298507463 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77506349282 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4904311911 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178117982028 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615158917573 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671528755941 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12073256307 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404500651233 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.