Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
No one can deny that there are advantages and disadvantages how computers have affected in people life. Some people agree with computer bring so many benefits in daily life. However, there are other people who believes that computers are not the best tools because it could be complicated to handle it. If I were to choose one, I prefer to used them for several reasons that I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in this times, companies were updated their work process with technology. One of those technologies is the computers. More specifically, computers have made work easier. In my case, I am working in an international company which the head building is in Argentina, and I am living in The United States. As a result, the best way we can keep in touch as fast as possible is trough the network. Also, I use the internet to communicate with my family members and friends.
Second, shopping this day became easier trough the use of computers. There are so many things that people can buy on the internet than ever before. I have to admit this viewpoint have been influenced by my own experience. As I am working ten hours a day, and when I finished I am so tired. For example, If I have to go shopping, I go on the supermarket website and I order all things trough it. To be honest, this way it so fast and efficient.
Finally, studying became so important in these years for people to keep update and continue being competitive in the work market. Since the computer came up, the courses on the internet increased. I believe that take a course using this took is incredible easier and cheaper. For instance, I have made a master degree in agriculture las month. I saved so much mony and time taking it on the network. if I have to move until the university, not only I need free days on my work but also I need spend more money in traveling, eating and sleeping place. For this reason a prefer to use computers to do those courses.
In conclusion, for all above I already mentioned I certainty choose computes making easier my life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56182795699 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66425245165 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5335754955 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7083333333 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252795527754 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727077157432 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952506657536 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146738325973 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610842383793 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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