Topic 23/5/19: In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
It is common to see different building designs in the same residential area due to little city control. While home owners can benefit from the freedom of choice, this trend has some undeniable drawbacks.
On the one hand, designing homes based on one’s architectural preferences should be allowed. For those who have strong opinions about organization and decoration, it would be unfair to force them to live in the same architectural structure as everyone else. If they can organize their own houses and offices, they are more likely to gain a sense of satisfaction and achievement. Additionally, when individuals hire the builders and arrange the household ornaments, the construction industry and furniture retailers could make more profit, resulting in an economic development.
On the other hand, the predetermination of home design can lead to some unwanted consequences. Firstly, different accommodation styles create an extremely eclectic and off-putting image for the residential area. For example, an ancient mansion in a French design could be next to a glass skyscraper which is a modernized style of architecture. That is the case when the rich build in adjacency; however, most neighborhoods have people from all walks of life and not everyone belongs to the same income bracket. Because of this wealth gap, a villa can be seen beside a one-story house, which creates jealousy and competitiveness in the locale.
To sum up, even though people should not be controlled when it comes to house design, I believe that the local authority need to promulgate certain regulations to ensure a harmonious looking residence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., resulting in an economic development. On the other hand, the predetermination ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33976833977 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1345977819 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8563276642 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199345917251 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679638565273 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523269927593 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118775185185 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404834016892 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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