You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Lais,
I hope you are well and enjoying your new life in Australia. The reason for I am writing this letter to you is because I saw your recent post asking about the life in Europe and I have some answer to help you decide your life.
The country that I am currently living is Portugal and I am really happy how the Portugal is treating this situation about Covid-19 which is worrying everyone around the world. Moreover, Portugal are taking some good procedures to control the cases once the region has more old people than young.
Actually, most of people are interested to know how the countries are doing to control this pandemic and Portugal is one of the countries which are having better results around the world. In my opinion, I believe that this results comes trough the government decision that was to close everything and keep everyone inside their homes avoiding spread more this terrible flu.
I can secure that because I am working in a hospital and I am seeing closer and I can be sure that we are the country in Europe with the best results. I hope that all my words can comfortable your thoughts.
Yours sincerely,
Igor Falcao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...re old people than young. Actually, most of people are interested to know how the countrie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, really, so, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67475728155 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35326768359 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3825119547 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243566425584 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10077915138 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821380335982 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127708682712 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984492030702 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.