More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work?
What will be the consequences of this ?
What solution can be offer ?
In our cotemporary society, the farmers tendency to live in urban areas is believed to be one of the most challenging controversy . Several aspects of human‘s life can be affected via this kind of migration. This essay will examine the main results of the farmers movement to the cities and possible solution of this issue.
The villagers are thought that many facilities and good jobs condition are existed in big cities. The result of this notion is that people try to relocate from small areas like villages to mega cities. Many serious circumstances have been brought via this act. Firstly, overpopulation is the most perceptible result which has numerous negative side effects. Despite the hustle and bustle of the cities, the increasing number of people have tended to leave the healthily life due to imaginary prospect of city life.When population is grown suddenly, infrastructures can not be brought by government. Tangible examples are available in current societies such as lack of job opportunities, lake of suitable residential areas, pollution of cities and lack of food materials.
Although this circumstance is the most controversial problem in resent years, it can be Addressed by various solution which several of them is mentioned in following. Privileges should be considered by government for satisfying farmers in their farms. Farming is absolutely demanding job. There fore if government want to intensive farmers, they can dedicate a low profit rate loan to farmers. Advance mechanical machines can be provided for simplifying their work by authorities.
In conclusion, various causes are existed by moving to big cities which are not worthwhile for government and people. For severe problems,not only is it recommended prevention is more convenient but also it is more cheaper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
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Suggestion: When
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...ntion is more convenient but also it is more cheaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34035087719 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02445733452 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9011177239 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266185955235 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749273143154 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543078411205 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152668315085 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273988834221 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.