Some people believe that “Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but the quality of their work”. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this belief?
It is accepted that company bosses should care about the employees’ performance instead of their business attire. I partly agree with the idea. This essay will elucidate my opinion.
On the one hand, leaders should not force their workers follow a strict dress code because the majority of staff members have said that they get jobs done more efficiently when they dress in the way which they are comfortable in. Furthermore, a number of respondents to one survey have expressed that they would have a negative perception of any firm which has a strict dress code. They suppose that a uniform deters them from being productive and creative. This could lead to high staff turnover which has cost and productivity repercussions for enterprises.
On the other hand, first impressions always count. Hence, the managers should make sure that staff members look professional and approachable with formal clothes when they are in a client-facing role. In other words, when employees have a meeting with vital investors, their appearance could show their respect for their partners.
In conclusion, companies should not make their workers dress formally on a daily basis. Nonetheless, it is crucial for staff to have a professional appearance when they meet clients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, nonetheless, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23645320197 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79348135166 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610837438424 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9086160914 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185082017825 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676491232009 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619356045965 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123977256532 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337494525446 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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