In the 18th century due to industrialization, a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problems in developed countries. What is your opinion about this?
For the past few centuries, there have been some major changes in our lives. The biggest change of all would definitely be industrialization. It had a strong impact on everyone’s lives, both positive and negative. Industrialization led to migration of people to more developed countries. This brought drastic changes to lifestyles and it also created various problems. This essay will be discussing the issue of migration of people to developed countries.
For a country to become industrialized, there are certainly sacrifices. To build factories, countless trees were chopped down. Many animal species had become endangered and some were even extinct. As factories were built, there were all sorts of wastes produced. All these waste products polluted rivers, seas and air. Undoubtedly, industrialization harms the environments the most.
Secondly, for the country that people migrated out, there was a generation gap. Most of the youngsters left for developing countries for a brighter future. The impact may not be revealed straight away but in a few decades time. The economy of the country would definitely regress and not to mention about the unemployment rates. Many third world countries are the victims of industrialization and it is clearly not worth it.
In conclusion, industrialization was a terrible change in the 18th century. The environment was heavily polluted and damaged and there was a huge age gap for the less developed countries. It is probably the worst event that happened in the entire human history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39834024896 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24523243358 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.7237021244 50.4703680194 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.05 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.05 20.9669160288 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241372485143 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668285863709 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074689365566 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129991050861 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748573619495 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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