Some people think it is always an advantage to buy local products. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some locals who are always supportive to purchase local products, because they believe it is advantageous to the local area. In my own perspective, I think this topic should be considered on both sides.
On the one hand, people who strongly support local products declare that it can boost the economic growth of their cities. Take my hometown as an example, mango is produced there and large amount of local business is established for mango products, such as food and drinks. In addition, the more local businesses are built up, the more job opportunities will be created, hence more people can earn money and afford to live a better life.
On the other hand, not all the products for people's basic needs might be produced in a local area, therefore is has to import those products from somewhere else. Additionally, with the rapid globalization, there are plenty of benefits if a local city could welcome products from outside. For instance, when we purchase products imported from outside, those merchants are making contributions to the tax revenue and they would continue to recruit more local residents if their businesses are growing larger. Moreover, government can encourage locals to learn those technologies from outsiders and produce those new products by themselves. Different kinds of products or business can form a healthy competition, which is also beneficial to stimulate the local economy.
To conclude, buying local products is helpful to the local economy, whereas accepting more products from other areas is significant to boost the economic growth as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2015503876 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75610558973 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9364987943 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261123171556 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103588567516 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579255123293 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168169387616 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337552136023 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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