The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion iby providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested that government offering funded trips to the public daily is the best option to decongest road traffic. It is difficult to agree more as will be discussed in this essay.
Authorities providing free transport for their citizens could possibly lead to people abandoning their cars to benefit from the government funded transport system and this will most likely shorten trips and also reduce the number of cars on the road. For instance, a 24 seater bus can accommodate all the occupants of 6 four passenger vehicles, so if we have three 24 seater buses carrying private vehicle owners, a total of 18 vehicles will be off the road and the more cars are off the road the lesser the congestion and the faster the trips.
The availability of free public transport will make life easier for the average citizen because fewer people would patronize privately owned transportation vehicles and this will lead to fewer buses operating which is another form of curbing traffic. For instance, in a survey carried out for a research, government of the republic of Congo provided it's citizens with free transport for a week and the traffic dropped by 30% which was due to the average citizens abandoning privately owned buses which were used to increasing their bus fares unjustly.
In conclusion, people in authority making available free transportation to the general public in order to reduce traffic will most likely reduce the number of vehicles on the roads, hasten road trips and also help reduce the transportation costs of an average man.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66195580725 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3695975516 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.428571429 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187064711736 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930386382216 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342326345955 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116621397119 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263294337643 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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