In many places, people's lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships.
Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been a remarkable shift in the lifestyle of our fast-paced society, causing many to wonder if family relationships will be affected. In my opinion, there still exist many advantages of this trend, but I think its drawbacks are far more significant.
On the one hand, the modern lifestyle brings about many impacts that are beneficial for our society. With information related to mental health gradually becoming a more widely-perceived aspect, family members can have a more profound understanding of each other's hardships. As a matter of fact, family members show more compassion towards each other through in-depth conversations, thus acknowledging that the impediments that they are facing are not trivial. Furthermore, each member of the family will soon come to a realization that there is no place like home. Henceforth, the family's bond will become remarkably tightened since everyone knows that their home is a haven compares to the excruciating life.
On the other hand, I would argue that the drawbacks of the change in people's lifestyles would eclipse the advantages given above. As people are paying more attention to their social status in the hierarchy, many will not hesitate to neglect their family relationships. Take office workers as a prime example, they have to deal with an excessive amount of workloads with a view to getting a promotion at the company. Under this circumstance, it leaves them no time to engage in family activities or even a proper conversation. Also, the detrimental influence of social media can divert people's focus on their family relationships to a superficial recognition online. Consequently, many teenagers would do deleterious actions, wreaking havoc on their family's happiness.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of the inevitable change in people's lifestyles are outweighed by its drawbacks related to the effects on family relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40863787375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13683196768 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5830427767 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267943599357 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908362488679 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059872932346 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179994410649 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569177914273 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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