Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
A number of people today are concerned with increasing global warming and the solution to our changing climate. While some claim that it is best to stop these changes, others however, believe we should co-exist with them. It seems to me that these changes are here to stay and so exploring different ways to cope with them is the best chance we have at possible survival.
On the one hand, preventing the ongoing climatic changes seems practically unrealistic for several reasons. First, is the inevitable transformation of the earth, seeing it has supported all life forms for several decades. Over the years, human activities ranging from space exploration, industrialisation to cutting edge technological advancements and deforestation has led to devastating climatic degradation and we have set in motion many changes still, some of which cannot be prevented. Even if these actions are stopped abruptly, global warming would perhaps continue to happen for at least several more decades if not centuries. Furthermore, the UN in a recent research has proposed that in order to stop these changes becoming irreversible, emission levels should be down by '2050'. This although true, appears rather unworkable as it would mean that important life supporting activities would be drastically reduced globally hence threatening human sustainability. Finally, is the sheer cost of this impractical aspiration. Currently, it appears to be the case that many important multinational companies are not yet green-oriented and unsuited to cope with the financial commitment of employing renewable energy sources.Therefore, money spent on research at preventing climate changes could of course be channelled to other sectors of the economy to curb other potentially global catastrophic risk like disease pandemics as this would be more economically beneficial.
Admittedly, preventing these climatic deteriorations may still be feasible. Nevertheless, this is surely by mitigating the flow of green house gases including other pollutants into the atmosphere and adapting with the changes already set in motion.
On the whole, it is undeniable that majority of these changes cannot be forestalled. Therefore, approaches targeted at a peaceful co-existence with them is surely needed and unless we dramatically alter our way of life, swaths of the planet will become hostile or uninhabitable. This appears to be overwhelmingly positive.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...f not centuries. Furthermore, the UN in a recent research has proposed that in order to stop thes...
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Line 3, column 1228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...t of employing renewable energy sources.Therefore, money spent on research at preventing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, at least, of course, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59349593496 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2464744735 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59891598916 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5696390062 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171028067741 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568645732163 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450710112924 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116178344532 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323095947823 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...f not centuries. Furthermore, the UN in a recent research has proposed that in order to stop thes...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...t of employing renewable energy sources.Therefore, money spent on research at preventing ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, at least, of course, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59349593496 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2464744735 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59891598916 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5696390062 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171028067741 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568645732163 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450710112924 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116178344532 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323095947823 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.