Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advancement in technology has made life much more easier than before.Personally,I believe that our grandparents lived a much more harder childhood than today's children.I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in this essay. To begin with,modern technologies have made a huge impact on almost all sectors of our life.The work man have to do now is more much less than people used to do before.For example,many years ago,when my grandfather was a small boy,He and his family used to live in a small village at the outskirts of Lucknow.Primary livelihood for the people of that village those days was aggriculture.My great grandfather was also a farmer with a small land,where he used to grow vegetables.Although the farm land was small but it required a lot of work for a proper crop. My grandfather used to work day and night with his father.As in those days there were no machine.ploughing was done by my father manually which used to take a lot of effort and time.One time the my grandfather w fainted while working in a hot summer,sometimes he even got injured by the plough.Nowadays, trucks and other machines are used which require almost no manual labour and is way faster than before. Secondly,humans have always been a social animal who is constanly looking for a interaction for comfort.This interaction was limited to a confined space for our previous generations.For instance,my grandmother and his brother were very close.When he moved to UK for his higher education,the only way to converse was through letters but they used to take a alot of time.My grandmother felt very lonely at that time as she had no friends except his brother which had a huge impact on her mental health.The modern day technologies have made it possible to connect to anyone in the world in fractions of seconds.For these reasons,I believe that an people can fulfill its urge to socialise much easier than before. In conclusion,I am of the opinion that our grandparents have lived a less comfortable childhood than us.This is because of the today's ease of work and communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95142857143 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2994260478 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.1344086022 348% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.211488182 48.9658058833 409% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.6 100.406767564 345% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.0 20.6045352989 340% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 5.45110844103 415% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159973987304 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106880018023 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472017682754 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159973987304 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 58.1214874552 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.01818996416 130% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.0537634409 298% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.