The chart below gives information about the most common sports played by boys and girls in new zealand in 2002

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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played by boys and girls in new zealand in 2002.

Given is a bar chart illustrating the proportion of boys and girls who participated in nine types of sport in New Zealand in the year 2002.

Overall, a more detailed look at the picture reveals that the most prevalant sport for girls was Netball while that for boys was soccer. The number of girls in Athletics, Netball, and swimming were higher than boys and vice versa for others.

Regarding to boys’ favourite sport, soccer accounted for the highest figure, at nearly 25%, followed by other sport activities at less than 20%. Likewise, 10% or under was the given data of Cricket and Marital arts. These four categories, namely soccer, other, cricket, marital arts, showed minimal percentages of girls which are 5%, 10%, 1%, 3% respectively. Compared to these sports, the differences between girls and boys in basketball and tennis were insignificant. The figures were from 5% to 10%.

By contrast, the percentage of girls in Netball was more than 25%, which was approximately 25 times bigger than boys. Similarly, around 23% girls and just 13% boys took part in swimming. Lastly, althetics was quite unpopular with 5% girls.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, likewise, look, regarding, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06914893617 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64272856341 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1346028416 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211215559866 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776447845349 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844014382671 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151901649069 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941312066569 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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