In the last few decades there are more and more cases of people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in media have no right privacy.
To what extent do you agree?
While, there is great contradiction that the celebrities are always persecuted by media, they should not get stalked in personal life. To be very precise, I completely agree with this opinion and think that glamour keeps people surrounded by press every time.
First of all, it has been observed that normal human being wants to follow the foot prints of famous personalities and want to live the same life. With the advancement of electronic media it has become easy to interfere in famous people’s life but every moment of celebrities get traced. Unless top-notch people raise the voice, media will always intrude into their life. For example, a well-known celebrity Kareena Kapoor is always focused everywhere, whether at the time of dating Saif Ali khan or at the time she was about to become mother. The famous people not only get attention but also sometimes get irritated when they really want to spend some quality time with the loved ones. Thus, it is really important for viewers to understand eminent people also needs private time.
Secondly, I believe that limelight also exceeds the expectations of top-grade people leading social pressure. Once high-grade people gets recognized among different platform, they want to keep its existence at any cost. Besides, maintaining. Celebrities work hard to stay fit. Failing to maintain the name with audience sometimes leads to depression in many cases. For instance, there is the latest heart breaking case of actor Sushant singh, where he committed suicide in absence of any Godfather in film industry to influence top most director leading in loss of films. Therefore, it is necessary to let famous people prove their existence in own way without being poked for the failure of movies and allow them to fail and success without creating social drama.
To recapitulate, I would rather say that it is mandate for celebrities to maintain their lifestyle because most of the people take them as their role model. Among all media should not be interfering in their personal moments.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59389759723 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.485029717 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199657470218 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636672775994 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519986167397 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125160034398 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293609555866 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59389759723 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.485029717 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199657470218 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636672775994 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519986167397 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125160034398 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293609555866 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.