Technology causes more problems than it solves
Technology has been major source of growth in 21st century.It has made our lifes's simple and comfortable.People from all over the world are indulge to make technology more efficient and profitable.
Firstly, people before the development of transportation used to travel for days to reach their destination.There was no form of communication unless for the ones who lived nearby. Technology has made us more reliable for transportation.People from all over the world can travel within no time.
Secondly, with help of netbanking and facilities to pay bills online had restricted us to stand in long lines. Social media is an excellent source of communication which can be carriend out anywhere and anytime. It takes is just a snap of one’s fingers with which we can scour the internet and get all the important information.
Nevertheless, technology has few demirts which cant be eschewed. Fraudulent of money can be easily done with hacking.Cyber security for all accounts cannot be assured.Cyber crime may threaten a person or nation's security and financial health.
In conclusion ,though technology has few disadvantages which is deleterious,it's caused us less problems than it has created.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42553191489 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47652673178 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.236744971 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166056049382 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691853740485 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943809916284 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105463544304 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103699417761 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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