It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.
There are several monuments of the past in the different countries across the world. Some people believe that it is pertinent to preserve them at any cost, but others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss why it is important to preserve the historical buildings.
To begin with, monuments can be a great attraction for tourists and it can generate revenues. These buildings may be of interest to different people in different countries for different reasons and they come to see them. For example, people from different corners of the world come to see the pyramids of Egypt and it is a great source of revenue for Egypt economy. Thus, it is important that these marvellous structures are kept safe.
Secondly, the old buildings tell many things about the past and history can also be understood better by the people. The designs of these buildings can tell how people used to live in the past and several things can be understood by visiting these places. For instance, the living style of Gandhara civilizations can be understood by visiting places such as Taxila and Swat, where there are several remains of Gandhara civilization. Therefore, for the understanding of history it is pertinent that these monuments are properly taken care of.
In conclusion, it is of utmost importance that historical buildings are preserved as it can promote tourism and give a better idea of history. In my opinion, the past monuments should be preserved at any cost.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74040427418 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6338145795 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161820369574 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659590222584 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411971456287 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114977342215 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434655324809 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74040427418 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6338145795 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161820369574 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659590222584 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411971456287 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114977342215 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434655324809 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.