Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Countless authorities aspire to have a prosperous country economically, and they deem to be happier with it. However, I hold that they have suffered a lot considering the unequal aspect of society and ecology in the pursuit of happiness for their citizens.
Firstly, money or infrastructure is just a tool. The economy may prosper or not, but human beings need to take a look at whether we are creating peace and harmony out of it or ironically vice versa. If happiness and suffering are a scale to gauge a country’s development, it would be less complicated. For instance, if a company sells deluxe crocodile belts, they would consider if other beings are happy yet. And thus, stepping on economic progress might bring plenty of pleasure and conformity but not significantly, including real prosperity and happiness.
On the other hand, nothing in this world is genuinely the same regarding the pillars of the country’s general development: ecology, society, and economy. To illustrate more, society and ecology are still adequate without the economy, but people can not procure any so-called civilization without ecology. Therefore, it is maybe proper to some extent to say economic advancement equals justice one, but equaling ecology or happiness could be an unjust gauge.
In my perspective, it may be a wrong perception to a certain extent that economic development is the best approach to advancement, or any kind of improvements are essential as equilibrium as others. This essay is not about measure equality but tackling each and every element with its own influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23828125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02449462704 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0280486778 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11224383522 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370495634878 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025231015628 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614360461976 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151923085381 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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