Undoubtedly, managers play main role in company's prosperity with working hard on projects and heavy burden of responsibilities that they have. However, I believe that each enterprise required creative workers, precise analyzers and even comfortable situation to make a helpful cooperation in a positive atmosphere.
To bring with, administrators are powerful members of organizations who have the most significant duty to commence any procedure. In fact, entire aspects of projects should be considered at first, then other employees have permission to make decision about them. Furthermore, workplaces space is one of the reason that motivate staffs to be industrious. I think, managers can make a competitive atmosphere for workers by giving them great privileges (free token, preferment or raising income), if they carry out plans and projects without any fault. Therefore, prosperous companies need responsible and vigorous tycoons who are intelligent and have enough information about their duties.
On the other hand, it appears that none of the organizations could be successful without diligent and skillful employers. Meanwhile, each enterprise should have some specific staffs who have special talents in analyzing step by step projects, making relations with other companies and other fields. Additionally, presentation creative ideas and working as a group are prominent tasks that should be done by staffs. Hence, workers have important duties as well managers to make a lucrative organization.
In conclusion, it is necessary for whole prosperous companies to have influential managers who can handle staffs and tough statues. Although, loyal and hard-working employers are required to perform manager's plans accurately.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 61
- Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend is a positive or negative development 78
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is this a positive or negative development 61
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to perform managers plans accurately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7890625 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13435124306 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6627943236 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152132728746 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510474964764 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399485254196 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910559595555 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164240065868 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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