Nowadays a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experien

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Nowadays a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Submitted by Poo on Sun, 08/09/2020 - 09:38

Significant knowledge regarding certain diseases and norms of medical, in modern time, easily accessible regardless of any sort of charges through various sites on Internet. The particular advancement in terms of medical in internet has been proving beneficial owing to well propounded reasons; however ,some drawbacks of the information can not be overlooked.

To commence with the positives, profound data on the internet about illnesses can be proved a boon to the masses in remote areas.The reason being, in countrysides it is certainly difficult to contact physicians instantly at times. Consequently, the inhabitants there can get spontaneous assistance of any disease or even critical conditions of the body on the renowned websites.For instance,in canadian newstime newspaper, it was published recently that a person living in a rural area saved the life of his wife from heart attack by following instructions on one of the popular websites.Apart from this, getting details of medicines for all disorders on the online sites are economical in terms of money. Since doctors charge large sum of appointment fee,in modern time, prior to the check up as well as recommendation of medicine, patients can save their money to be paid unnecessarily by receiving information of the relevant doze from the internet.

On the contrary, online facts can not figure out the persons' individual issues including allergies from some salts in medicines etcetera.The reason being,each human being has one's own issues,which can be tackled by having complete diagnosis by the physician.It is ,therefore, essential often to visit doctor to get rid of illeness despite looking for the solutions on the websites.Eventually, the online knowledge would be disastorous,if persons who require supervision continue to take medicine without prescription of eminent doctors.

In conclusion,although information related to medical can lead to ill effects in oversensitive people, the particular knowledge is advantageous not only to the villagers but can also save the hard earned money of everyone ,mostly spend to pay high fees of doctors.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55076923077 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31024016362 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643076923077 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.617180858 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.714285714 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.4285714286 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8571428571 7.06120827912 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166620068248 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073990107026 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148644380207 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959136750689 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245200052 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...owing to well propunded reasons; however ,some drawbacks of the information can no...
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...ed a boon to the masses in remote areas.The reason being, in countrysides it is cer...
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...ns of the body on the renowned websites.For instance,in canadian newstime newspaper...
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...dy on the renowned websites.For instance,in canadian newstime newspaper, it was pub...
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...ructions on one of the popular websites.Apart from this, getting details of medicines...
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...tors charge large sum of appointment fee,in modern time, prior to the check up as w...
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...online knowledge would be disastorous,if persons who require supervision continu...
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...rous,if persons who require supervision continue to take medicine without presci...
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Suggestion: , although
...ion of eminent doctors. In conclusion,although information related to medical can lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55076923077 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31024016362 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643076923077 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.617180858 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.714285714 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.4285714286 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8571428571 7.06120827912 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166620068248 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073990107026 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148644380207 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959136750689 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245200052 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.