Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays , there are contradictory beliefs regarding to making relationships among people . Some people consider that opting friends would be based on same mentality . While , others are disagree . From my vantage point it would better to choose friends with regard to a particular mentality .
In the one hand , different think would be effected positively on a personal decision . In other world , sometimes people with having several opinions from others think would have a chance for comparing between another idea . Therefore they choose an ideal opinion from different personal experience and expertise and he or she normally add his or her individual thinking to them . For instance a singer can give his or her friends opinion’s about the music which is become to release and gain another idea to improve the quality of song .
On the other hand , taking a decision due to having similar opinions in a group would be easer than a couple of friends with different thinks . Because, Not only they usually haven’t any disagree about their goal , but also they attempt to achieve their purpose or decision as soon as possible . For instance me and my friends are emotionally and mentally the same , so in our free time we decided to go to forest for camping and all of us are interested about this decision that’s why we have the same opinions.
In conclusion , this essay discussed both side of argument with regard to an ideal friends . Although , variation opinions in relationships would have positive effects on people decision , i strongly believe that having the same mentality would be appropriate between friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73094280979 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3490166446 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343200833812 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1224979645 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692401467553 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214386831283 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370431565485 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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