At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults. Compare with number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?
The number of young people are reported to increase in many countries in compare of old generation. Although several benefits are brought by this issue, numerous drawbacks which is caused by mentioned phenomenon can not be ignored. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to elaborate man drawbacks which countries will be encountered in the future, if they can not balance their population.
The increasing number of young generation can cause many difficulties in society which two major of them will be mentioned. It is believed that young generation is more productive. Despite the efficiency and productiveness of young people, they will need more facilities in terms of living, health condition, employment and entertaining. If the country has not enough strength to provide infrastructure of these amenities, young generation will not fulfill their life and they will become unsatisfied and depressed. For instance, when the society and government can not bring suitable job opportunities, in the best condition juveniles will attempt to migrate another country. Therefore, unbalancing in age of population can lead the country to devastated circumstances.
Another compelling reason for my position is, when the young population become older, they will need increasing number of facilities. While this hug young people get age, Not only are they not productive as long as they were young, but also they are like a burden on community. A good illustration is allots of amenities should be brought by government such as health care provision, pension scheme, more hospitals and more attention. Ah a result a great deal of budget should be dedicated by government to caring these old generation.
In conclusion, considering above argument, under no circumstances can negative points of hug population of young people not outweigh benefits if this situation. Being balance in distribution of age in population is the best condition which is recommended to every country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3729903537 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09500855678 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3902591667 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174031002412 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667307149405 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628148382111 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118092773988 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242706005724 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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