Essay topics:
in some countries people of all ages group engaging into men's force or even exercising are there are more advantages of drawback to this development.
Gone are the days when the masses were not aware about physical fitness.This notion has gone undersea changes.even sense technology took place.In some countries masses has been participating in sports and physical activities. There are various merits and demerits.This essay shall elucidate the advantages and disadvantages for extra exercise in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, sports activities have numerous benefits Owing to this, people become a more strong and physically fit. To be more precise, as their fitness give them opportunity to win hazards competition. By this,they can contribute to grow their nation. For instance, In Australia peoples are more physically strong as they participate in Olympiad and various competitions. where they win medals like gold silver, which is helpful to grow their nation. Consequently, physical awareness helpful to increase the nation's reputation. Secondly, due to physically strong body, the people escaped the hazards disease such as obesity and anxiety. It is also fantastic method to reduce the stress.This is well known that 'In a sound body have sound mind' by this I mean, citizen contribute more to develop their nation. Thus,sports and exercising give a numerous benefit. Not only individual but also the nation.
However there are few drawbacks for over exercise and sports Due to this, to become a physical fitness Government have to need to spend hafty amount of money to establish gyms and sports centre. It might be economically difficult for Government. If Government invest halfty amount of money on on this definitely they will not invest money on the other aspect such as improved the poor people condition,poverty,education.It might be create unnecessary stress on Government. Nevertheless, there are some difficulties for authority to arrange the equipment. If the Government invest money on this equipment definitely it will reduce the health charges. Not only this but also, It will be helpful to reduce disease and medicine expenditure. Hence, drawbacks are less as comparative to benefit.
To recapitulate , I vehemently voch that although, there are few negative aspect for exercising and sports activity yet the positive positive aspects are more out weight the drawbacks so people should become a more physically fit due to their various advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49166666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19932726333 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.877018273 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.85 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173854214174 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493037211697 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032644534484 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104559428043 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00671731208549 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.