Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has freedom to choose work according to their choice but sometimes it does not apply. I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. There are some reasons why I agree with the statement.
First, Life is unpredictable and we do not know what is coming next in life so we should not stop learning any kind of job. Sometimes the situation makes us do unpleasant work without any option. Such as, I never participate in household activities with my mother because I do not enjoy them but after getting married I am doing the whole work by myself. If we are always ready to learn then it might help in life.
Second, the adverse and awful situations present our strength and weakness. The liking and disliking may be based on difficulty of task or It may be cliche. When we do such dislike work then we understand our strength and weakness. For example, I never liked to write essays because it was a difficult task for me even though one day I tried to write an essay then I got it was difficult because of lack of vocabulary.
Third, people usually leave or avoid doing unappealing work whereas such work may give a wonderful experience in life. For instance, my friend dislikes hiking and always drops the plan of outing with friends if they went for hiking. Once we forcefully took him for hiking and he enjoyed it a lot after reaching the top of the hill. So we should always be ready for new experiences whether we like doing that work or not.
Finally, on the basis of examples and reasons we can conclude that people should sometimes do work that they do not like or enjoy. Every type of work gives unique experience and memorable moment which we can save in our dictionary.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed I am doing the whole work by myself. If we are always ready to learn then it mi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55238095238 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45385941975 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6197956186 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325883979878 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129606741317 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171673361691 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231195872636 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144284063628 0.0645574589148 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed I am doing the whole work by myself. If we are always ready to learn then it mi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55238095238 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45385941975 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6197956186 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325883979878 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129606741317 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171673361691 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231195872636 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144284063628 0.0645574589148 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.