Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
In recent times, financial stability has become one of the most preferred necessity of Mankind, the
basics of food, shelter and clothe has now been replaced with a fantasy of living a luxurious life.
Since ages, wealth has been relatively associated with happiness, as to a greater extent it has been
utilised by humans to attain worldly pleasures. But off late, people have started realising that,
money alone cannot complete the desire of being happy, as one needs to have a good health to
enjoy and family with whom happiness can be shared.
Most crucial aspect of humanity is to sustain a happy life and without monetary assistance it is
almost impossible to survive. Money can buy us happiness, it empowers us to buy anything in this
world, from good education to a high standard of living, travelling around the world and having
capability to avail best of the health services. Apart, there are numerous things one can purchase
varying from luxury cars, lavish mansions, high end designers wear and accessories rather there is
not even a single manmade thing, which money cannot buy.
Contrary to this, a popular belief has developed nowadays, that happiness is internal and has not
much to do with external pleasures. Although, money play a significant role in happier lives, but
health has now been become a priority, as people spend their life to earn money, but later their
health doesn’t allow to enjoy this hard-earned money. Families and friends too get neglected in
order to attain financial stability, but then the charm of sharing happiness with them is lost. This fact
of life is well explained in a book by Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple Inc., one of the richest person on earth,
who expired at early age sighting various health issues and during his last days, no one was by his
side to support and care for him.
To recapitulate, money does play a vital role in our lives and is influential in survival of human
beings, but happiness doesn’t come alone with this, one should be blessed with good health and
loving family in order to understand what happiness actually means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 22, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enjoying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enjoying
..., but later their health doesn’t allow to enjoy this hard-earned money. Families and fr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 76, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to get'?
Suggestion: to get
...hard-earned money. Families and friends too get neglected in order to attain financial...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94428969359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48818407077 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593314763231 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3115933936 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.363636364 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6363636364 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24251660966 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088375093987 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685913456328 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630232768458 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475515917307 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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