Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
In today’s world, people have become work workaholics. The greed of money and desire for luxurious things have make the people work like machines which in turn have left no time for fun activities. They keep doing work day and night and forget about other essential things that are necessary to be present in one’s life. There are more drawbacks of long hour working as compared to its benefits.
To begin with, working for long hours create plethora of health issues which makes the person physically unfit. Health is something which is more significant because without it no one can enjoy the life in better way. Moreover, there are numerous diseases associated with working for longer period of time. For instance, eye sight may be badly affected or back pain may arise. Notwithstanding, doing official work continuously may become monotonous as people are working constantly without bothering about the leisure activities they can do.
Furthermore, doing endless work may become a reason for work life imbalance. Nowadays, people are getting very less time to spend with their family members primarily because of their hectic jobs. Therefore, the value of relationships are now diminishing day by day. However, this was not the scenario in earlier times where people used to give plenty of time to their loved ones. In spite of this, when humans will keep themselves happy by doing any activity that they are fond of, this will ultimately improve their official and personal life both.
To recapitulate, it is important to do work but at the same time it is mandatory to live the life because the purpose of working is to live life peacefully and enjoy it to greater extent. Thus, the leisure activities play key role in one’s life. (301 words)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ases associated with working for longer period of time. For instance, eye sight may be badly a...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...or longer period of time. For instance, eye sight may be badly affected or back pain may ...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es happy by doing any activity that they are fond of, this will ultimately improv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99319727891 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55905311287 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1741727357 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154500664374 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510264717418 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393251588481 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946621502353 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444468691103 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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