Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment is one of the needed factors that give us live. Therefore, it is not understandable to protect it. And to keep this life be forever, each generation have to be aware of this problem themselves. It is also the main reason that makes some people think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. And me, I strongly agree with it.
First, we need to mention about the benefits of protecting environment. What does environment give us? A lot of things. Depending on good environment, we can breathe in fresh air, we can eat fresh food and we can drink fresh water. What else we can receive from this. It’s our health. If we lived in a great environment, diseases certainly would be decreased. At that time, our health can be protected and healthier day by day. Someone with good health will do lots of things effectively in a productive way. Our country also becomes more and more developed. Hence, protecting environment is really really important.
Now, let’s imagine each of us does not protect environment. What will happen? There will have many bad things. Anything that we eat, drink and even we breathe is polluted. And when these pollutions go into our body, all internal organs will be affected badly. If everything happened like that, we would be depressed. There is not energy left to do anything else. On the other hand, all creatures cannot grow anymore. Trees, animals, and humans, sooner or later, are disappeared. The Earth also become a death planet.
We will return to the time when the earth was not yet formed or maybe like other planets, without living. From these things, we cannot fail to protect and save this habitat.
Summary, the next generation should follow the current generation to protect the environment. When we can protect this place together, life will be healthier and cleaner.
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Suggestion: really
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, really, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89968652038 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65490037208 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4364852974 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.1 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6333333333 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.3 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218659998763 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564010658977 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107257238439 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148235713033 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131837513441 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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