Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many environmentalists suppose that the people today should bear responsibility to remain the green environment for the next generations. In my opinion, although this is unfair on the current generation, it is nonetheless a burden should be taken up. On the one hand, that’s not fair as people to day have to suffer severe consequences caused by the generation in the last century. The progress of industrialization in 20th century has damaged our habitat disastrously. The evidence is that automobiles and air travel which became common in the last 100 years are two main contributors to the global warming. Because they used a large amount of fossil fuel and released of hazardous substances into the environment. Besides, the population explosion in the world over the last decades has created a fierce pressure on natural resources due to the full exploitation and mass consumption of the resources to meet the basic human needs such as accommodation, food, and transportation. For example, to meet the demand for housing, many rain forests were cut down to replace with magnificent construction works. On the other hand, today’s generation should proactively and positively eliminate harmful environmental factors to minimize disasters in the future. Although people cannot change what occurred in the past, we could probably make changes from now. For example, to ameliorate our habitat, people today could take some effective measures such as stopping deforestation and beginning to plant more trees, no littering and releasing the hazardous substances into the environment. Furthermore, the government should limit the increasing of population to reduce its burden on the environment and the natural resources in the future. Past generations who set the world on this path cannot came back to remedy their mistakes and the next generations will resent the current generation if steps protecting environment are not taken toward drastic reforms. In conclusion, although the current climate changes are not caused by the current generation, they must be responsibility for what will happen in the future. Leaving this problem for the children of the future will put them in a potentially unwinnable situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3976945245 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15183408278 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9439686048 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250687778046 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068576428069 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709155064175 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250687778046 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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