Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a situation that people tend to prioritise well-paid jobs over their own interests and professional. Meanwhile, many believe that holding a proper occupation is more imperative than holding a lucrative but tedious work. From my perspective, I agree with the latter statement that one should place their passion above money.
On the one hand, there are many undeniable reasons why sufficient paycheck is fundamental in work choices. One of those incentives would be the demand for more furniture and materials. As the world is heading to consumerism, cash becomes extremely prevalent that it is almost impossible to maintain a stable life without it. Furthermore, one should firmly consider wages when choosing a career because it is meaningless to work in the profession they love and deal with numerous financial issues. For example, individuals could suffer from fears to lose their houses and appliances because of debts and eventually striving relentlessly just to face another crisis. In other words, without an adequate monetary source, people, as a result, would have to undergo many stressful problems.
On the other hand, whereas money is cardinal, it should not be a preference for one's enthusiasm for working. Because as people cannot enjoy processes, their productivities thus could lessen considerably and directly harm their salaries. Moreover, one's career path has a tendency to associate with one's life so that possessing a monotonous job could generate the worst experience. As people have to do repetitive activities year-round, they would lose the whole meaning of working or even living while only focus solely on more and more cash. Meaning that individuals will work for money but never be able to do anything about the tremendous assets they have got.
To conclude, there is always a contention revolving about whether one should seek for well-paid jobs or passionate jobs. In my opinion, I believe that passion would be prioritised over money when ones opt for their careers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28348909657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83258610216 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0642144052 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119083266533 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408384010693 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027273319097 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769792455062 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295338397027 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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