many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone.
What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do you think this a positive or negative development?
It is true that using a smart phone has contributed to huge period in leisure time of people. Personally, I think that there are several reasons that lead to this trend and it has some adverse effects on users.
On the one hand, there are obvious reasons why people consider using a smartphone as a main way of entertainment. Firstly, thank to advances in technology, smartphone become friendly with people from all ages and meet basic needs of relaxation of users. For example, in the free time, people can easily enjoy a favorite film or update news by accessing to unlimited resources on the Internet through their smartphone. Secondly, technology companies pay attention to digital entertainment field, which leads to production of the large number of relaxed applications that are available on smartphones without paying cost. Thus, using smartphone in the leisure time is a top priority.
However, this trend also causes negative effects. In terms of society, people tend to keep in touch with others by sending messages on smartphones. As a result, residents have less face to face conservations with their neighbors even family members. This can break down the connections of society. In term of health, eye-related diseases stem from seeing into screen for long time. Besides, people who have sedentary lifestyle is prone to obesity.
In conclusion, there are some clear reasons explaining for using smartphone in free time of people, I believe that it is detrimental for society and individuals.
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| 2020-10-08 | nguyen van a | 35 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etrimental for society and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19183673469 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86182124261 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5414849051 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267956174612 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813899385335 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474057181005 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154021503913 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226418251642 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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