Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, a trend of going to foreign countries for study has been very popular. Although studying in a different country is always a rewarding experience for each student, but there are surely many barriers that they must be faced with during the study time. In this essay, advantages and disadvantages of going to a second country for study will be discussed thoroughly.
There is no denying that seeking the chance to study in foreign countries is actually a precious experience, especially for high-school students. The line of reasoning lies in the fact that they have to live an independent life without the caring of their parents, especially when they suffer from tiring illnesses. What’s more, if any financial issue comes to their life in other countries, they will strongly encounter it by working more for ensuring the balance in spending between tuition fee and daily activities. Going through those difficulties, they can acquire invaluable knowledge and skills from other countries for a brighter future ahead.
Besides, studying and living abroad can be viewed as two sides of the same coin because disadvantages that it brings to students are extremely considerable. Particularly, when living in a second country, your day will be full of worry or calculation and even stress whereas, you can have a simple life with more fun, more friends if you choose staying at home. To reach your success, you must practice ignoring all outside distractions to focus on your studying because each minute passing is always a critical property to you. More than that, mental issues must also be mentioned in a independent life. Occasionally, because of not wanting to affect your job, you can not grudgingly get back home in significant moments like Tet holiday or Mother day…
To sum up, studying abroad has never been a simple experience because besides many advantages such as bright future and interesting experience, it also brings to us more unexpected challenges. Therefore, before making decision about going far from your home town for study, we need consider and equip ourselves with a strong mindset to withstand any coming trouble.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stay'.
Suggestion: to stay
...th more fun, more friends if you choose staying at home. To reach your success, you mus...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mental issues must also be mentioned in a independent life. Occasionally, because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14488636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77045448719 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5474918043 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.307692308 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183110551932 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649366492993 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479971326996 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108006025792 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352821340193 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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