With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions do you suggest to deal with this problem.
Many adolescents land themselves in troublesome situations due to free and easy access to the different social media platforms from where they get a chance to connect with their friends and even strangers. The most viable solution to overcome this problem is supervised internet access and provision of smartphones only after they turn 18.
Due to the advancements in technology internet is now freely available and easily accessible even to the young hence this has to be supervised. Youngsters must be allowed to access the web only for educational purpose and for a limited time frame. Comsequently, they would not get a chance to get into any kind of social media interaction with their friends or unknown people. For example, I was allowed to use internet only for one hour if I required it for my school work and was not given a phone until I was no more a teenager.
Another solution to this predicament is strict or no usage of Smartphones by children and teenagers. Smartphone is the source that paves way to the world of social media applications like Facebook Instagram through which youngsters connect with other. Moreover, due to their immaturity they get into problems like being blackmailed for money. Therefore to avoid such cases parents must not allowed the use of Smartphones by their kids at least until their completion of High School. This is why kids are banned from getting phones to the school in most places in India.
In conclusion internet access by youngsters under strict parental supervision and minimal or no utilisation of Smartphones will lead to reduced number of youngsters being victims of the crimes due to advanced social media platforms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...blems like being blackmailed for money. Therefore to avoid such cases parents must not al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81381205224 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3762086029 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24456533975 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864503730781 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496042048314 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153749526818 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023703469977 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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