Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments
Many people say that it is the duty of the governments duty to protect the environment, but others say as humans we must learn to take responsibly of caring of our environment for the sake of the current and future generations to come.
Firstly, governments must play a vital role in maintaining the environment. Authorities must introduce bills in parliament that they must investigate environmental issues and that one single person cannot take care of the environment on his own and that we need governmental support to make big decisions to protect our environment. They need to reduce the number of diesel vehicles, old 2 stroke 3 wheelers, factories that has huge amount of gasses being released into the atmosphere hence that these are some of the thing that pollute our environment.
Secondly, we as citizens of every country must do our part to protect our environment as well. We must stop polluting our rivers, sea, streets and reduce deforestation and use biodegradable bags and reduce the usage of one time use plastic bags and bottles despite being very popular products we must and must try and recycle as much as possible.
In conclusion while people may vary in their opinion, I think that if each citizen of every country does few positive changes in favour of the environment, I think it will make in a big impact on our lives and saving not only for us but for future generations to come and this something that we must think about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...y people say that it is the duty of the governments duty to protect the environment, but ot...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nto the atmosphere hence that these are some of the thing that pollute our environment. ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... very popular products we must and must try and recycle as much as possible. In conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83266932271 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81820064666 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5062286339 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.285714286 104.977214359 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8571428571 20.9669160288 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.25397266985 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141843821566 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637774510638 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650707471186 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913387797641 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666822483863 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.