The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In many developed countries, the policy of investing for both social welfare programs and healthcare services are more encouraged by their governments with the purpose of creating a strong impulse to the development of the economy. In parallel with the economic impact, there has recently been one worrying issue that the life expectancy of the population is higher than ever before. This means that the whole society will be faced with the problem of a higher number of the elderly than others. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon will be discussed.
Admittedly, the increase in the average age of the population is a key indicator for the sustainable and stable development of countries’ economy. Particularly, workforce is always viewed as a primary force for the stability of active economies in terms of international and national trading. When the working age of the workforce is widened, the cost of reeducating new blue-collar workers will be reduced considerably that can lead a big margin of the manufacturer’s benefit. Regarding to big corporations, being steered by the elder leaders who are full of experience in practice will help to keep their well-established empires run stably in the long term. More than that, the elderly may have more time to hand their understanding about leadership and specialized skills down to younger generations.
Apart from those above-mentioned advantages, there also must be saying that the higher life expectancy of the population partly influences on the naturally fundamental development of society. The higher a number of the elderly is, the more money need to be invested for social welfare and healthcare service that serve for their life. As a result, there will be a lack of national budget concentrating on building all necessities for society like community infrastructure, up to date equipment investment, educational base opening. Last but not least, overpopulation actually put more pressure on the extensive development of country due to increased unemployment and lack of housing system.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down by saying that although the increase in the older people in society reflects the good working of medical system and ensure the sustainable development of the whole society in economical terms, but overpopulation and lack of common budget caused by them can bring the country’s prosperity to a grinding halt if not being considered in time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, regarding, so, well, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28498727735 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19528850494 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544529262087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2234929644 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.357142857 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12095558114 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434242946859 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709886299949 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727962252219 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472914321696 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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