Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Due to the industrialization of society and the depletion of natural resources, global warming is becoming a threat to the entire world. So in this essay, I will point out several reasons why this phenomenon happen to us and also give out some solutions to deal with it
From my perspective, there are three main reasons for causing global warming. First of all, the growth of temperature caused by a large number of people using their own cars plus the burning of fossil fuels from factories has been increasing the amount of CO2 emission releasing into the atmosphere. Secondly, the size of the forest has been also gradually mitigated annually by illegal forest destruction actions. Finally, agriculture also produces a lot of methane gases from cattle, which creates a greenhouse to trap CO2 inside.
However, to tackle this global issue, both individuals and governments have to collaborate together. In terms of government, they have the power and the financial, so it will be easy for them to introduce a “green law” or create some green summer campaign for citizens. In addition, they could also invest in some renewable resources such as wind, solar, or water power to replace fossil fuel resources. Besides that, as a resident, we can reduce releasing CO2 into the environment by using public transport, choosing products with less packing, or recycling as much as possible.
In conclusion, I believed that our lives depend so much on the environment, so we should act as soon as possible to resolve this problem before it becomes a horrible scenario in our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82973505847 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648854961832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3387227669 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951078768006 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413749547782 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622514849148 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499509127305 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323961040142 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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