You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with
your hotel room.
Write to the hotel manager. In your letter…
- Tell the manager about the problems you had
- Explain to them how you feel about what happened
- Let them know what actions you would like them to take.
Dear Manager,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, who stayed at your hotel The Garden View at Nashik in room no 203. I was annoyed by pathetic early morning service and incapability to take immediate action for customer satisfaction.
I had an early morning train at 6.10 am to Pune on my checkout day from the hotel. The hot shower was not working and when I called up the room service, he told it will take a while to get it repaired, additionally he made no arrangements for bathing elsewhere in hotel premises. Above that, when I asked for the coffee, the receptionist denied by saying that the kitchen staff has not yet arrived.
It is really frustrating to have such a lousy morning start, I went by just washing face and empty stomach. The charges what I have paid were wasted, instead of staying in the hotel, I could have managed night travelling and saving my hotel expenses.
I would request you to grant me fifty per cent payment back or else provide free stay for a next visit to compensate with your negligence. Looking forward for your positive response.
Your's faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: VB_A_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'take awhile'?
Suggestion: take awhile
...ed up the room service, he told it will take a while to get it repaired, additionally he mad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316933643 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70618556701 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4506325589 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169373614326 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587660199421 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433466366444 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893768970056 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190703045378 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: VB_A_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'take awhile'?
Suggestion: take awhile
...ed up the room service, he told it will take a while to get it repaired, additionally he mad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316933643 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70618556701 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4506325589 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169373614326 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587660199421 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433466366444 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893768970056 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190703045378 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.