The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries
The table illustrates the alteration in the proportion of population aged 65 and over in three different nations during the period of 42 years, beginning in 1988.
Overall, it is clear that all three countries are expected to experience an upward trend during the whole period. Moreover, Germany’s figure is predicted to dominate the chart.
According to the chart, the figure for Germany’s population was the highest one in the initial year, at 20%. Moreover, the next 40 years are forecasted to experience a significant growth in the proportion of German seniors.
The trend was totally the same when it came to the remaining nations. Accounting for 16% in 1988, the percentage of Canadian residents aged over 65 then saw a steady increase to 21% in 2000, being predicted to reach a peak of 26% in 2030. Likewise, about 14% of people came from Britian in the initial period. Despite the trivial growth in 2000 and the prediction to rise to 20% in 2030, the proportion of Britian residents will remain the lowest number compared to other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9606741573 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75127795076 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8704668646 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1708779229 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597331181487 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630332790539 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103546984435 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602048895526 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.