-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One can learn about another person from the books and movies that the person likes.
It goes without saying that there are various points of view about judging people’s personality from their favorite movies and books. In this line of thought, there has always been a controversial question, whether it is appropriate to learn about human’s character by the movies and books that he likes or not. Some people believe that people are what they soul consumes, while others hold the opposite opinion, stating that loving a show or a writing does not present an individual’s internal beliefs. I personally concur with the latter group due to a couple of reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite to be mentioned is that movies and books are part of a person’s hobbies, which he enjoys during his spare time. In the other words, the materials that people use to take a short break from their hectic life and feel relieved don’t represent their character. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I love comedy-romantic films, specially after a long term of busyness and hard work because they can distract me for a while from my daily chores. while, on a normal day, if I have to choose something to watch, I would prefer Si-fi genre. As a result, my personal choices not only don’t show my taste, but also the highly depend on my mood. For this reason, I believe a human being’s behavior has nothing to do with his movie or book taste.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that the modern society’s trend has a significant influence on people’s choices. In fact in the contemporary era and with the assistance of social media, everyone can easily impressed by the online critics and to go with the flow, people claim that they love a movie. Drawing from my own experience, when I was in middle school all my classmates love the twilight saga movie, just because I wanted to be a part of them, even though I did not even watch it, I presented myself as a huge fan. It is certainly clear to see why movies can not talk about you.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons and points into account, one can rationally conclude is that movies and books might affect someone’s character, but they don’t represent the watcher’s and reader’s disposition. This is because in this way, you miss not only the point of leisure hobbits but also the societies pressure on choosing a hardcover or a film.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7868852459 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73413963211 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583138173302 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.344202603 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.235294118 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266263149274 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802318051926 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596876948153 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147734483545 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486552179871 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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