The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Lately, residents in rural areas tend to move into the large urban regions, which creates tons of urgent problems in both places. At the same time, finding some measures to solve these problems is becoming a topic of public interest. In this essay, before addressing some practical solutions, I am appointing dozens of viable troubles in two areas.
Many pressing problems occurred when people from mountainous areas decide to live in cities. Firstly, the significant leap in the urban population acts as a precursor to overcrowded. Additionally, overcrowded become a major contributor to the lack of accommodations for all people, the unemployment of youngers. Furthermore, this tendency not only has an adverse bearing on the traffic jams in cities but also indirectly induces air, noise pollution, among others. The detrimental effects also happen in rural regions. When the main workforce moves to live in other environments, nobody takes accountabilities to cultivate the fields. Rural areas will also be a lack of professional labor in education, medical care places. All serious problems take a vital determinant in enlarging the gap between these two places.
Several solutions can be implemented to remedy the aforementioned issues. The government can enact some policies to give some good promotion opportunities to encourage people to turn back to their hometown after graduation. They also should invest to build more factories and companies which provide jobs for people in mountainous areas. Moreover, people in the countryside should pay more attention to create their own business to enhance the potential of their own hometown.
In conclusion, in order to solve totally all the problems in both countryside districts and cities, governments, local authorities along with people need to change their minds and do immediately some practical actions instead of only drawing in the paper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44256756757 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02461105022 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1045898263 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226520532859 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631720604805 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646881899982 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121443254815 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291272406547 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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